micro short story – they

They

It was summer when they came.
Four of them.
They were myths. Legends. Shadows on walls.
Stories were told about them. At campfires. On dark stormy nights.
But that was all.

Until.

I went to bed – one night. Couldn’t sleep. Window was open. Curtain – still. Crescent moon. Twelve o’clock.
The first one appeared. Its small head, slowly – carefully – peered in the window. I didn’t move. Tried not breathe.
It moved in further. Big ears. Long hair. Talons.

The legend was true.

It looked about. Then at me – bright glowing eyes – and blinked.
Did it see me? I didn’t move.

Then.

It turned its head back outside – then back in.
Another appeared. Then another. And one more. All in a row. I could just see their heads. All the same. Different color hair – maybe.
All at once – they looked at me. Then at each other – and began to move.
Down the wall. On to the bed. By my feet. Their tongues dart out. Taste the sweat on my feet.

It tickled.

Until.

They bit.

The legend was true.

©2011 Patrick W. Murdock – All Rights Reserved.

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micro short story – is it safe?

Is It Safe?

My Mother. My Father. My brothers and sisters. My relatives. Friends. Acquaintances.

Everyone.

“Always ask” they said. “Always!”

“Is it safe?”

“Absolutely right” I thought. Never go out unless you were sure you wouldn’t be found – that nothing could see you.

“Never.”

But. I needed to go out. Food was almost gone. Water the same
I couldn’t wait any longer. Not another day.

I looked out from the cave. Everything looked clear below – in the valley. Surface was dry. Brown.

Except – for the red stains.

I could see one. Then another. Still more. Some clustered together. Others not. There were always there – a reminder.

I scanned the area once more. Carefully. Put my right hand up to my ear. Turned my head. Then – listened.

Waited. Nothing.

I put my hand down – put one foot just outside of the cave. Cold. Listened again. Still nothing.

No – there was something. A familiar sound – a feeling – really.

My heart.

Pounding.

It’s time to go.

Out of the cave. Ten yards. Twenty. Fifty. Running – fast. Don’t look back – ever – they said. You must reach the overlook – first. Then you had a way out.

Three hundred yards. Trees. Brush. Flash by. What was that? Saw something – out of the corner if my eye.

Forget it – keep going. Almost there. What was that – again?
Keep focused. Just a little further.

Ok. I’m there.

Kneeling. I’m breathing fast. I look back – nothing. Remember, they said. If there is – you run straight forward. Better that way.

But there was nothing.

Time to choose – left or right.

Right.

I pause. Breath in – then push off from the tree behind me. Running. Weaving. Between the trees. Keep looking forward. I’m breathing hard now. It hurts now – my heart.

A screech. Oh no. Where? Behind me?
Another. Yes – behind me but to the left. They’re here. Oh. How could I have missed them.

Keep running.

I can make it – to the cabin – at the bottom. I’ll be safe. They can’t get in there.

There’s food. Remingtons.

More sounds – howls – running – not me. Them.

They smell – food.

Got to run faster. Going straight through – bushes. Don’t care.

Briars.

Louder screams – piercing.

I see the door. They’re so close. Rushing behind. At the right. The left.
Ten more yards.

Then.

Silence. I’m at the door. They’ve gone. It’s so still. I’m safe.

Open the door. Step in – turn – lock – bolt. Rest my forehead on the door.

I’m so tired. A breeze. Feels good.

Then. Warm. Breath. On my neck.

I turn.

©2011 Patrick W. Murdock – All Rights Reserved.

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micro short story – Skip

It skipped.  I couldn’t see it doing it but that’s what they told me.

“Why?” I asked.

“Sometimes they just do” they replied.

“Why can’t it carry on like all the others?” I said – frustrated.

“There’s no reason to get upset, it’s fine.  Sometimes they just do.  And besides, no one will notice – especially the others.”

“I don’t care if they can notice or not – I just want mine to act the way it should” I replied – exasperated.

“Do you think it’s skipping now?” I asked.

“It will always skip. Just don’t think about it.”

A few hours later they let me go.  They were right – I couldn’t tell if it skipped but I didn’t like it I thought to myself.

I couldn’t keep it off my mind as I walked back home. “Stop skipping, stop skipping, stop skipping!” I yelled inside my head as I crossed the street.

Screech!

I looked up and saw them looking at me – one holding my wrist.

“Did it stop skipping?” I whispered.

“Yes” they said.

“Good.”

Then.  It stopped.

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micro short story – Wondering

Wondering

I’m wondering. Just sitting and wondering. When will it come through the door. It’s gone through all the other homes. Always through the door.

Not the roof. The window. The walls.  Why the door?

I could have left – days ago.  I knew it was coming.  I had heard what it had done.  They wouldn’t believe me.  Said it was just a legend.  Now they’re all gone.

I hear it’s loud cry. It knows I’m here. I wanted to show them that I was right.  That’s why I stayed.  Maybe it knows – knows that I believed – that I am good.  I hear pounding.  My heart – no – it’s footsteps – no – both.

I could have left.  Crash. The door is gone.  It sees me.  It’s coming.

I yell.

“I believed!”

©2010 Patrick W. Murdock.  All Rights Reserved.
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micro short story – The Key

The Key

I’ll be there in ten minutes came his message. “Ok” I typed back on the keyboard of my phone.

He said he wanted to give me something.  It was Christmas night – 5pm to be precise.  A present? Maybe.  I had just become friends with him a few months ago.  My friends didn’t really know who he was – “mystery man” they called him – if that’s what he was.  He had promised me a gift and I was hoping for one before school got out – but it would still be ok – it was still Christmas after all.

I got up from my bed and walked to the front of the house – to the dinning room.  It had big windows – floor to ceiling.  I could keep an eye out for him from there.  I passed the living room on the way – my aunt and uncle were sitting on the far coach near the windows – talking, laughing.  “Lucy!”  My aunt called out.  “Where are you going?  What are you doing?”

Adults! I said out loud in my head.  Why do they ask so many questions!?  I smiled and kept walking.

I looked out the windows of the darkened room – to the left and then the right over the snow that covered the yard.  Five minutes left.  Maybe he’ll be here early.

I kept scanning the yard and the road just beyond but still nothing. Then, I saw them – his eyes – piercing blue but illuminated so they would be as clear to you as lights on a tree.  Suddenly, light filled the room.  “Lucy” my Mom called out softly with her head just around the kitchen door “what are you doing?”

“Just looking at the outside” I said – hoping that would be all that would be needed to be left alone

“Ok – don’t be to long – you know your aunt and uncle want to spend time with you” she said as she closed the door.

I looked out across the yard but he was gone. Yet I could see the tracks of his feet in the snow moving paralel the house and heading toward the back door.

The doorbell rang.  I made like a shot through the dinning room into the bright the bright room that was our kitchen – beating my Mom to the door with a slight hipcheck that caused her to exclaim “Lucy!”

“Sorry Mom” I said with my sweetest smile. “It’s my friend.”

I unlocked the door and opened it slowly – no one was there – but there was a package.   It was a small square box wrapped in shiny dark green green paper with silver ribbon and bow.  And it had been left at the foot of the door, on the stone walkway.

“My Christmas gift” I said to myself with a smile. I leaned down and picked it up.

“Lucy” my Mother said from the other side of the kitchen “invite your friend in.”

“Oh, he’s gone” I said as I closed the door.

“I see he left you a gift – why don’t you open it up here” she said with a smile.

“Yeah” I thought to myself “like that’s going to happen.”

Instead, I smiled brightly and oh so cutely and said as I walked out of the kitchen “thanks Mom but I’ll open it in my room.”

I ran back to my room smiling and waving quickly to my relatives as I did, and was down the hall and into my room before they a chance to call out to me.  The door closed behind me and I sat on my bed.  I held the gift in my hands examining it closely.  It was then that I noticed the card, which was nestled underneath the ribbon.

I decided to open the card first. The envelope was quite small – maybe two inches square – and the card itself was heavy stock.  I pulled it from the envelope slowly.  It was a map. But there was more.  On the back side was a not written by friend.

“Merry Christmas!” it read.  “The gift that I promised awaits you at the point indicated on the map.  Use the key inside the charm to access.  Tell no one.  Be there at exactly midnight.”.   It was signed N3.  He never told me his real name but he said it didn’t matter because I wouldn’t be able to pronounce it anyway.

I quickly unwrapped the box throwing the paper to the floor.  Inside the box was a small jewelry case, which was emitting light from the seems. I opened the box and found a silver starfish charm attached to a necklace – and saw that the bright light came from what looked like diamonds along the arms.

Just then the door burst open.  It was my mother and my aunt.  I was so focused on the gift I didn’t hear them walking down the hall.

“Lucy!” my mother exclaimed “Show us what your friend gave you.”

“Oh, it’s beautiful” my Aunt Lisa said – having quickly seen it after barging into my room.

“Thanks Aunt Li” I said as I moved the card away from the gift and into my right pocket.

“Is that a card?” my mother asked, having seen me attempt to hide it from their site.

“What does it say?”

“It’s private mom” I said.

“That’s fine Lucy” my aunt said.

“We don’t need to know – right Shirley?” she said to my mom, her sister as she grabbed her arm and dragged her out of the room – closing the door as she did.

Still walking her down the hall I heard my mom yell out “don’t stay up too late Lucy!”

“Ok Mom” I yelled back.

Holding the charm in my hand I gazed at its light until I began to feel dizzy and fell back on my bed, closed my eyes, and went to sleep.

I awoke suddenly – sitting up in my bed as I did – searching for the clock.  Spotting it I saw the time – 11:50.

Ten minutes I said to myself.  I still have time – I can make it.

I jumped and headed to to the window – slide it open as quietly as I could.  I grabbed my backpack, threw in a couple of snack bars, the latest book in that vampire series I loved, a bottle of water, and my iPod.

I quickly looked about the room, saw my cat Dex settling into the warm spot I had made my bed.  I wish I could take you Dex, I thought, but knew I couldn’t.  One last check – there on my desk – a picture of my family.  I reached as far as I could, grabbed it, threw it into my bag, and zipped it up. I slide the window shut, turned, and ran off into the night.

Eight minutes later I was within a hundred feet of the meeting spot, which turned out to be a spot, a small clearing, in the thick forest that lay just beyond our home.  I figured I was about a half-mile from my house but density of the woods made it seem like we were miles away.  I couldn’t hear a thing, except my own breathing.

The path there had been an old hunting trail, not really visible unless you knew what to look for as I did.  I used to spend hours in the woods, wondering about, enjoying nature, the trees, the forest creatures.  And it was here that I met N3, just six months ago.  He seemed to appear out of nowhere one night as I walked along the path.

“One minute” I thought. I better get moving.  I started forward, picking up my pace as I did.  Thirty seconds. I reached the edge of the clearing. Five, four, three, two, one.

I stepped into the clearing.  “N3″ I said.

“Yes Lucy” I am here.  “Move forward toward the rock in the middle.”

“Rock?” I thought to myself.  I don’t remember a rock.  Yet, there it was, right in the middle, large and rectangular, perhaps ten feet high by four feet wide.

As I moved toward it the seahorse charm began to glow.  I lifted the necklace over my head and faced it toward the rock.  “Press it against the rock” were his instructions in the note.

I did. It glowed so brightly I could barely look at it.  In fact, it wasn’t just the charm that was glowing, it was the rock too.

“Just one moment more” I heard my friend say.  Then.

Three days after Lucy disappeared, police found the charm in the opening in the woods.  There was not rock, though it’s impression was still there.  She hasn’t been seen since.

©2010 Patrick W. Murdock.  All Rights Reserved.

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micro short story – Waiting

Waiting

I saw the door shut behind them and the first light go on inside. Their path became clear as more lights came on – one room, then another, then another still – moving ever farther back into this place.

Beings they were but shadows they became as they went about their tasks. On the walls I saw each movement – bending, reaching, lifting – changing form as they did.

I checked my watch. Ten minutes – they’re taking to long. I’d call them but they don’t have cell phones. They don’t even talk – or at least they don’t with a voice. I mean they say things – I just hear them in my head. Maybe they’re not saying things – maybe this is a dream – am I dreaming?

No. I’m not.

They heard my thoughts when they were near by – perhaps…..I’ll concentrate.

I lower my head and concentrate “You need to get back. You’re late. Hurry”.

I look up – they’ve stopped. I see their shadows turn toward each other. Then. They begin to move back toward the front. Lights going off as they do – not by their hands it seems.

Now they are back at the door – shadows no more but once again men.

Into the back of the car they went just as they had when I first encountered these strangers just four hours ago.

I know where we need to go – there’s no need to ask. I begin the journey back – out of the neighborhood, to the main road heading east. We leave the border of the town, the lights fading as we move farther away and enter the quite farming region, with homes few and far between and the sky big, dark and filled with stars, planets and who knows what else.

The dirt farm road we’ll take finally appears and I ease the car left onto it – and proceed slowly for the next couple of miles until we reach the destination. It’s a spot big enough for a few cars – deep in the middle of freshly tilled fields.

When I look in the rear view mirror, I see they are no longer in the backseat. My eyes refocus to the front where I find them standing outside and in front of my car, looking directly at me.

They say that they have been waiting a long time but soon their wait will be over. Will I wait with them?

Yes.

They turn to their right looking out over the fields and wait. We wait.

I awake to a noise. Someone is knocking at my window. A farmer. What happened? I must have slept. Am I alright?

Where are the others?

There are no others.

I am alone.

©2010 Patrick W. Murdock – All Rights Reserved.
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micro short story – The Bridge

The Bridge

I’m running. Fast as I can toward the town. Ahead, I see the old bridge. It crosses the river at the entrance to main street. That’s where I’ll go. It’s an old bridge – really old. It was scheduled to be replaced – next year.

My heart is beating fast. I can feel it – pounding – pounding against my chest. I’m breathing – hard – I want to stop. Stop and stand, lie down, just stop running. My muscles ache. They hurt so but I mustn’t stop. It’s behind me, getting closer.

I’m so tired – been running for so long. “God!” I call out in my head “I just want to stop.” But I keep on going. The bridge is near. I can see them – at the other side. The east end. Standing. Staring. Watching.

I can’t think – can’t remember why I’m running. Then I hear it. The pounding of it’s steps. Coming. Closer. “I don’t want to run anymore. I hurt so much” I’m thinking.

Cramps. What next? The road is shaking now. The blacktop beginning to crack. I can see more of them gathering on the eastern banks. The leaves are gone. Is it fall? November? How long have I been running for? My sneakers are worn. Spots of paint on the tops? No. It’s blood.

It won’t be long now. Just fifty yards more. Then I’ll be safe.

The noise is getting louder. It’s getting closer. I hear it roar. They stand silently, watching still. Would they help me? It doesn’t matter. I just need to get to the bridge. The ground is shaking more. Cracks in the road are running ahead of me now toward the bridge.

“No, no!” I cry out in my thoughts. I leap forward to catch up. And then I’m on the bridge. Safe. But it’s shaking. Violently. I try to walk forward but it is crumbling beneath my feet. I see them still staring, silently.

It roars once more. Then.

©2010 Patrick W. Murdock – All Rights Reserved.
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